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I can see through your eyes
Your truths and your lies
your lips they say no word
and your feet that move on foward

I wont take this no more
i'm at the end of my chain
i wont take this no more
this is the end of the road

People tell me what to do
but forget, how bout you
everyone makes mistakes
But those mistakes are fakes

I wont take this no more
your mask is just fading
i wont take this no more
no one to save you from falling

(Cello solo interlude)

i won't take this no more
your future is not mine
i won't take this no more
but i'll change it if i can
:iconxapatheticxpeacex:

Author's Comments

i dont remember but i think i wrote this during a tough week of mine.... but what ever... another freestyle from class...

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:icon0usuratonkachi0:
Aw, this made me sad. I hope your "tough week" never repeats itself. :hug:

You have a talent in "freestyle." I really like the last line "but I'll change it if I can."

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I would TAB that.

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:iconxapatheticxpeacex:
thanks very much... and thanks for all the favs

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Reached Bukowski Depression Point
:icon0usuratonkachi0:
You are very welcome!

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I would TAB that.

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